Review for The girl all the bad guys want

The girl all the bad guys want

(#) Moonshyne 2008-07-07

Hi Alice,

I loved the update. Poor Crystal, and Gee being such a jerk. If he really cared about Mikey's feelings he never would have started having an affair with her.

I'm such a knuckle head when I said Bob was in Chicago, that's right he was in recently giving Gee Alex's address.

The story just have been so focused on the triangle of Mikey, Crystal and Gee, I forgot.

Bad me!!

Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Author's response

Well you'd think wouldn't you. But maybe he was just being stupid with the whole Crystal thing.
Thanks for the review.