Review for Family surprises

Family surprises

(#) grookill 2008-07-08

I'll join the chorus of "this is too good of an idea to be a one-shot".

If you do decide to write more I think the whole Harem thing should be relegated to the background, leaving the bulk of the story to deal with Rebbecca, Rose and their reactions to Potter Castle, and to a lesser extent, any reprisals the Potter wives may take upon Dudley.