Review for The girl all the bad guys want

The girl all the bad guys want

(#) Moonshyne 2008-07-10

I loved the little bit about Crystal's background.

It seems Frankie wants her and Mikey to get back together. At least Mikey doesn't totally hate her.

Where is Mr. Gerard is he hiding from her?

Looking forward to more.

Author's response

Yeah, I realised that I hadn't put much about her background in there so I thought I'd do that and add a bit more depth to the character.
You'll see more of Mikey and Crystal in the next few chapters.
Thanks for the review.
Alice.