Review for The Accidental Harem

The Accidental Harem

(#) Lincos 2008-07-11

I cant really take this story seriously or even read past the first sentence when your fourth word into the story is a MAJOR mistake.

"At four o'clock, Herry, Hermione, and the rest of House Harem"

Herry?

Lol, Epic Fail is Epic.

-Linc-