Actually, I didn't think that this was bad at all. I loved Elena's tale and the short sequence of Gerard singing at her funeral.
And James is back! Omg! :D
Uhm, there's one little thing that's jsut a little bit confusing at times: spelling. I mean, no offence, but if you could try.. :D I do that too in my fanfics and I'm always glad when someone tells me, so.. you know :D
I can't wait for the next chapter!