This chapter made me laugh and smile in so many places... so you know i'm going to name them all now because i love to do that sort of thing ;)
So here we go! I loved LOVED loved when Frankie gave Defne his present and was all giggly - i could so imagine him giggling like a girl while Defne was gushing over the action figure! (and by the way, i'd love to have one too!) "Gerard at the beach, Gerard on stage..." hahaha. Too cute!!
I absolutely loved when Defne woke up and saw the drawings... the birds were so adorable! And Gee wanting to buy them and name them after them was CUTE, but he was right, they'd die soon and that wouldn't be very romantic haha.
The shirt Devon gave Defne was awesome too! I'd definitely buy one if i was in a band hehe. You should have one!! ;)
I also thought it was really cute when Gee suggested taking a shower together with Defne (now that is hot) haha.
Chocolate chip cookie dough is my favorite ice cream in the world, and i'm not joking! My second favorite is chocolate with brownie chunks... yum! In spain they only sell those two in an american ice cream cafe called Ben and Jerry's... ever heard of it? They have majorly weird but delicious ice creams! Gerard has good taste ;)
When everyone made fun of Defne after figuring out she and Gee made love i laughed so hard! Really well written and funny.
Gee's gift was beautiful, of course. I like the reason he gave for choosing that necklace, so romantic!! ;)
So... i think thats all! If i think of anything else to say about this chapter i'll be sure to post it! haha
So now i'll go rate this +1 ambiance, because i think thats what fits it best, and then i'll go rate the last chapter, which i totally forgot to do before (better late than never, right?)
And then! I'll go read your other story, which i'm glad you advertised here, otherwise i would've taken ages to realize it existed! hahaha
Update soon ;)
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Author's response
Yess! I love reading your lists of favorite parts =)
Hehhee, I dunno why but that just sorta came to me as Frank's present. I could so vividly imagine him getting her Gerard's action figure (which I, too, would love to have) and then getting all hysterically cute like that! Writing that was so fun!
Ahhh, the birds! They're adorable. Yeah, no one would want them to die of starvation on the bus, poor things and Gerard is pretty smart to have thought of that =)
And gahhh! I really do want that shirt, you know? I don't even know if I can find it somewhere :P
Showers are hot.
And well, chocolate chip cookie dough was my own reflection on the story because it's my favorite ice cream, too! I was busy eating some, actually, half an hour ago. Chocolate with brownie chunks sounds incredibly yummy but I'm afraid we don't have those in Turkey. I've heard of Ben and Jerry's - thanks to internet - and I wish we had them here, too! And I'd like to think that Gerard has good taste in ice cream ;)
Yeah, making fun of people's sex lives. It's usually funny like that, hehee :D
Mmmm, Gerard's gift... I tried to make it as beautiful as I could!
Heee, thanks for the ratings! I'm glad you rated the previous chapter too, it's definitely better late than never. It looked so pitiful with a giant 0 on the side :/
Yay! Now I'm gonna go and respond to your other review over there, hahaa xD
I'll update as soon as I can, like always.
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