Review for Mind Games

Mind Games

(#) EilayAdnayVolieay 2006-08-10

Aww! I decided to review this story here at ficwad instead of ff.net since I was on this site at the moment. shrugs But anyways, I thought this chapter was EXTREMELY cute, just... all of it. Funny, cute, adorable...

I loved the bathroom scene. I love Atlanta's reaction to Archie's feelings for her, and I loved the way Archie reacted when he realized Theresa had told Atlanta. Felicity teasing Atlanta, and Atlanta actually showing a weakness, emotionally, was good. Tough girls, aren't always so tough. Just all of this, it was in-character with a bit more of a mature take on the show we love :) That is, swearing and dissing people--- go Theresa!

Awesome chapter, AMAZING story thus far--- update as soon as you get the chance.

--- Jess.