Great start to the story mate, I can't wait to see what you have planed for the story.
I can't believed that Privet Drive was boobytrap with bomb, who the hell would do that?
Great, I like that Tom helped Harry. I like how Harry meet Gabrielle and reacted to the story of hers and about needing to be bonded to her.
Author's response
Stay tuned then, and even now, at ch.30, no one has really asked about the Dursleys and the traps. I don't think I've told it yet either. It'll be in the epilogue i guess. You'll be able to see the progression better than the people who have followed me chap by chap.
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