I do like this story, great way for Harry to save Daphne from this marriage and the aftermath of it. and Moody taking care of Cyrus was and i agree with one of that reviewers, was done with style.
I'm curious of what the aftermath's going to be. it's going to spread to the students at Hogwarts what's going to happen. and of course it's going to be interesting to hear their reactions
Another thing i'm curious is Hermione meeting Justin's family. and her reaction that Justin is loaded. and of course Harry's reaction when Hermione tells him. and of course her finding out about this. (of course that would mean a trip to the library for her when she finds out) great chapter. keep it up
Author's response
- Staging a murder does require a bit of finesse...
- Chapter 12 was all in a single day. As my current outline sits, Chapter 13 is mostly the next day, when Harry and Daphne learn to deal with each other, and decide what they're going to do. The reaction at Hogwarts will probably start in chapter 14.
- Hermione and Justin's relationship will be explored a bit more, probably starting in 14...