(#) iunno 2008-07-29
haha this is really good so far.
keep it up.
but can i give some constructive crit?
try... be a little bit more subtle bout how you approach the "I love you" thing, i thought that was a bit right out there.
but it made the story good, :)
so yeah, keep up the good work, im enjoying it (Y)
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