Nice. I like the way that Harri and Harry decided to deal with the Malfoys. I can't wait to see the results, they should be fun to watch if not to experience. I do have one small nitpick though and that is that you sometimes slip up with the gender pronouns. An example is near the end of the scene between the Dark Lady Riddle and Lucile Malfoy, Dumbledore is referred to as a he. Otherwise this is a great and interesting story which I enjoy reading very much. Actually I've enjoyed it so much that I've re-read it many times. So thank you and keep up the good work please.