aaaah no I damn near cried when I read this I think I only have one criticism- there's not enough punctuation! Hang on a minute, you know where I live... Hides under bed
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thankyoooo
i've been wating for a review for aaggggeeeeeeeeesssssssssss!!
ur 2 are my first (hiphip horaaayyy!)
mmm...aahh... i dnt mind ur critisism (it's constructive critisism!) so, i wont kill u this time (notice the this time in that sentence)!