This is great stuff. There are you plotholes, but they are extremly subtle. Anyways, I like how realistic it is. I've read a fair amount of this, as lame as that sounds, and alot of them are badly written, horrible spelling grammar, plotlines and reactions. I can't that you enough for not romanticaly pairing Harry and Hermione, because that is what most people do, and after reading the actual books (no offence)and hearing him saying she like his sister and considering everything it's kind of sick to see them like that. You are a great writer. Don't stop!