Review for The Other Woman

The Other Woman

(#) harlequingirl-x 2008-08-11

haha i dont get one fucking thing but i like the story LOL

th tenses are way to confusing but its got good content!

are they going tobe normal tenses now?

update soon =]]


Author's response

So sorry, but when I wrote this on two other sites I was abble to tell people when it was past and when it was future, but on here I can't so I put it in the summary section. For now on I will do it before the story. POV's are present tense and narrator's or 3rd person voice are past.