This story really is too good to stop right here. I hope you can find time to continue with your writing (I know I'm a fine one to talk, I haven't updated my story for about a year now).
I really would like to see where you take this story from here. I'm sure Fluer will come to understand that it wasn't Harry's idea to come back from the Davis' with a slave, and there are so many other people Harry has to 'get even' with.
Really I just want to see what Merlin set up for a Harry's obstical (sp) course.
Keep up the good work.
I look forward to your next chapter.