Damnit! Ficwad is such a bitch and wouldn't let me read or review your story for ages so I was checking back every ten minutes to see if they had fixed the problem and I was going stir crazy!
Anyway, what I've wanted to say for ages was this chapter was a-m-a-z-i-n-g!
I loved to see the dynamics of Mikey and Vi's relationship. It was really sweet. And I actually thought Mikey was going to believe her for a second when she was saying it was a practical joke.
And Gerard; what a jerk! At least he's sorry now though, I guess thats something. And oh no, he was drinking!
She better not do all that shit that Dee told her to do though. She should just tell Gee, what has she got to lose?
Aw Mikey was so sweet.
And now Gee's gone as twisted as Viola-they make a great pair.
She better not hurt him though. Don't get me wrong, I adore Vi but I adore Gee more.
Great!
Update soon.
Alice.
Author's response
Oh I know, I couldn't respond to comments and it took ages to upload the chapter, ficwad is just being ficwad-y so meh.
I'm glad you liked what I did with Mikey. I figured he didn't get enough screen time in this story and I do love that kid.