That was awesome. I like the fact that Izzy was the more controlling one and not the other way around, which is how most people write them. Great job. Izzy turned out fine, in my humble opinion.
Author's response
Thank you...I wrote it in an attempt to make a reviewer from another site happy...she said I write Izzy as too weak, helpless, etc. so I tried writing him differently and this is what came out...