You seem to have good ideas, you obviously enjoy writing your story but you need to either get a beta or at the least spell check your work. I have read the reviews others have posted and can only say that if someone doesn't like your story ignore them unless they are willing to input constructive criticism. For the reviews that are purely flames, I’d suggest you use them to remind you that there are close minded people in this world and not everyone is intelligent enough to express their thoughts in less hurtful ways. Keep up the good work. I hope to see an update sometime in the near future.