Review for Gawking


(#) alice93 2008-08-17

Hey. It looks like you've got a good story coming on here. I like the sound of it. Just try and be careful about your spelling and maybe start a new line every time someone new speaks. Apart from that it was pretty awesome-I like your writing.
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Hope you update soon.

Author's response

thanks!! ill definatly try that!