Review for Untold Paradox

Untold Paradox

(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-21

Hi Dondon,

That was horrible what happened to Jamia. I'm glad she told Donna. Only now to tell Frank.

Great job and I see a chapter is posted!!

Author's response

Hey, thanks for the review

I feel awful doing that to Jamia, but it had to be done.

Im glad she can trust Donna tho