AAAH! NO! This was the best fanfiction EVER, with the best plot EVER! I mean, I kinda understand it, I know how hard writing is, but... puhleeeese! :( Meow.
What I liked: The plot. I think t's fantastic. (Maybe you can get someone to continue it for you? I know, it won't ever be the same... but...)
What I didn't like: Hmm... if I have to say something spontaniously... Watch your spelling, girl :D