Review for Second Fiddle

Second Fiddle

(#) slaphanson 2006-08-13

I have to say that I like you take on the parents being alove but not their for Harry. It actually seems realistic for the wizarding world to give up a squib. I also have to say that I hope Harry and his parents/family's relationship develops slowly as I can't see Harry accepting people into his life very quickly after they left him alone with the Dursleys. Although it would be nice to see a Lily and Petunia scene, maybe with Petunia really giving it to Lily about droping probelms in her lap, even if Harry wasn't a problem and was mistreated. I also hope that Harry didn't just get magic by merging with the wolf or whatever he did.
Anyways keep up the good work and update soon.

Author's response

Pet and Lil face off. I'll keep it in mind. The wolf is a bit more complicated.