I suppose it will be a perfectly competent fic, but you're shipping Harry wrong if you're SIYE-compatible. You are a total fool and a Jo sycophant. You don't deserve to write, you tasteless imbecile.
Author's response
Alright. The gloves are off.
You listen here and you listen good. Unitl you write a god damn fic of your own, you void all rights to critise others.
If you don't like my story, stop reading it you shit head. In other words: FUCK YOU!
'Sincerely',
~Jeff~