(I'm not gonna bemoan to you about how awful it is for you to quit, and beg a thousand times for you to continue, just so you know! :D)
It's a real shame that you aren't continuing this story...but I know what it's like.
I've posted a story that had over ten chapters, but then I just couldn't come up with anymore things to write. I'm still on Hiatus right now, but I'm planning to go back to it eventually.
(The story isn't posted here, but I'm thinking about it.)
Anyways, away from my useless ramblings... :P On with the compliments!
This was an awesome story, truly. I loved the plot and everything was well written, with very few errors, if none. I really liked how you made the chapters long in length, it made it easier for readers to find what happens without having to wait several chapters to find out one simple thing. I liked the song names that you put out at the beginning of the chapters, it made more interesting for the story to be read. It was so original, not cliched like a lot of Frerards, and it was exciting 'til the end.
Things I didn't like or hate? I'd have to say NOTHING. All of it was perfect, and I have to say again, it's really sad you're giving this story up.
Maybe someday you'll think about updating it, or maybe not. Either way, I'd love to find out the ending.
Can you please send me an email to: michelle42495@hotmail.com?
Thanks and good luck in the future! I hope you stay on Ficwad, and write more stories soon!
P.S. I know that this was an extremely long review, and you probably got bored reading it. Hell, I would too. #_#
P.P.S This story will still be on my Alerts list in case you ever do decide to update. (Hopefully!)
P.P.P.S (This is the last part you'll have to read! ^_^) You're a great writer! :)
So long and goodnight... :D