Review for Untold Paradox

Untold Paradox

(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-25

Hi Dondon,

That was sooo sad. I felt bad that Alicia was too heartbroken to go. I loved how they girls and the guys seperated to deal with things differently.

Off to the next chapter.

Author's response

I know, I felt Jamia should have one of the girls closer to her than the others.

Makes it more sentimental.

Thanks for the review