Definitely agree with the above comment about spelling and grammatical errors, as well as simple homonym errors, it's "caches", not "cashes", and "cache", not "cash" for one most noticeable one. Having said that, I quite enjoyed the chapter and it was interesting to see the battles in both worlds. I rather suspect that Dumbledore is going to be severely upset about the number of Death Eaters who will now have no further opportunity to repent; that they will have no further opportunity to injure the innocent will likely escape him.