Review for Untold Paradox

Untold Paradox

(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-28

Hi there Dondon,

What an array of emotions. It was so sad when everyone was saying goodbye.

But when she woke up it was Yay!!

But then really, really sad. I feel bad for them.

Author's response

I know this may sound awful, but Im glad you felt bad for them, its what I was aiming for :P

I couldnt kill off Jamia, not just yet anyway.

Things will get worse Im afraid