Review for Untold Paradox

Untold Paradox

(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-28

Hi there Dondon,

Amazing chapter and I feel so bad for Mikey and Alicia. But he's right it would be one thing to give up to someone you don't know and maybe get updates every now and again. Another when you have to see them every day.

Looking forward to more.

Author's response

I know it would be heart breaking, and also the kid will be confused if it looks more like Mikey and Alicia than Frank and Jamia who are supposed to be it's parents.

Oh my lord you just gave me a new idea! thanks :D