Hi there,
So many things against Bob and Mary, Gerard and now Jayde.
I loved the introduction of the character, it brought a new life to the story. It's exactly what I would have done LOL!!! (In a way)
I'm glad you took my advice and took your story back. I can't wait to read more!!
(see people do read what you write in your responses LOL!!! even if it's to other people)
Author's response
hahaha
xD
lol
hahahhaha
thanks lol
xx