Review for Fantasy

Fantasy

(#) never0kay 2008-08-29

This chapter absolutely melts me...

Seriously...

It just makes me hapy in a weird way..

The way Gee smiled at Chantelle flirtatiously, the way Gerard walks suddenly leaving Eliza thinking.

Man, this story has something...It's going somewhere...


Carry on...

Author's response

Wow thanks.
I really like your detailed response, it makes me wanna write more but I can't its nearly midnight and I have to get sleep I got paintball tomorrow at 9....
I really don't wanna go its the time of the month for me and I'm not in the mood to move and get bruised.
Anyways I didn't mean to reply too long hahahha.
Thanks again.