Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) moonpig 2008-08-31

Lol - brilliant Neve. I loved this update and the tension betwen Jill and Bob has been built up so well. I really like the humour you put in it.

Favourite line was "and well I am after all me"

I feel selfish for asking but please update soon. Can't wait to see how Ruth reacts around Frank.

Author's response

Thanks so much, you know i was worried about it being a bit long but i'm glad i made you laugh :)

I'm dedicating the future Frank/Ruth moment to Moonshyne since she was the inspiration for it :) Got to go and put it into words now.