Noooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Awww dammit. Please nooooo! They cant give up that easily, god there so blind!
Im sorry but no matter how much it hurts Bob he must know the truth about his son, then if he is upset Maddie can comfort him. But I guess thats not how things go
Aw hell no, This cant happen! I cant express how much I dont want this to happen. The way you describe how they have 'lost eachother' makes me feel there hurt, and I speak on there behlaf it aint nice.
If you wernt such a dam good writer (and reviewer ;) ) I would be telling you that I hated the fact they arent going to get back together.
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR But I know you will have a good reason for doing what you do :)
Please dont hate me for that review, Its meant in the nicest way possible :D
Dondon x
Author's response
Hi Dondon,
Because of the things I have planned I can't really say if they have totally given up. Next chapter will definitely put things in perspective at least for one of the characters, while the other still feels hopeless.
I've made no secret that Bob will eventually find out about Bobby and it's already plotted in my head as well as the ramifications.
Yes having gone through some of my stories you know I do not do anything without a reason and again I need these two where they are right now. No matter how much it sucks.
Don't apologize for letting your feeling out it's the biggest compliment I can get. It means you care about this story and the characters. I could I ever be upset about that?
On to the next chapter.