Review for Untold Paradox

Untold Paradox

(#) clutsy_93 2008-09-01

WOW.
Awesome, I so wasn't expecting that.
and then she got shot.
I was like oh my god.
Update Soon please and can't wait for more.

(: x.
Samantha

Author's response

I had a whole other ending planned out and I was writing it when I thought of that.

Bet your pleased, or else Mikey would of died =O