Review for Untold Paradox

Untold Paradox

(#) Moonshyne 2008-09-01

Hi there Dondon,

I loved it and actually when James got the phone call I thought it was Alicia.

But it was great that she got back at Cassie and wants to make a go at being a family.

Great job

Author's response

Hey Moonshyne,

I thought you might have a sneaky sucspicion that Aicia would be back as seen as Cassie was.

I think I will post and update maybe see how the family is getting on, if they are getting on.

Im working on a new story right now, will be much more organised.

Thanks again for all your reviews

Dondon x