I don't think anything is wrong with this chapter, I think it was great. Especially when Atlanta actually got into the bed with Archie, lol. Can't wait for you next chapter (hehe hope there's more JT fluff) great job!!
Author's response
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I think I might have just been paranoid again, sometimes I'm weird that way and I go beyond being my own worst critique. Anyway, next chapter there might not be more JT fluff or too much anyway, since I'm thinking on a bit of JayxArchie arguments which Theresa might... not like. Anyways, thanks for reviewing and thanks for the compliment.