Well so far the story is good, but the thing is that it needs longer chapters, a good explanation of, why harry wasn't affected by fleurs veela charm as you said, and to take harry + fleurs relationship not slower as someone suggested but on a good step. what i mean is, don't rush them into doing something fast, like getting married for example, or something else, but give harry the time to enjoy his 1st relationship, because don't forget that he is still a "virgin" in the matter of relationships and such. You get my saying bro? but show hus harry + fleurs romance a bit more in the story. ok? Overall the story is good and i wait for the next chapters. and as they said before you should try finding some beta readers.