Wow this is just getting better and better. poor Jill re the email. interesting where that will go in the future. i love how you put subtle bits in like Mikey not being so comfortable and Gerard being a bit paranoid. it makes it very real.
i am totally loving how you are writing Frank, he is damn adorable! and i smile when i read your little Gerard bits like him doing his hair! haha! Ray is as you would expect, a sweetie. and Bob god bless him. i can't wait for their relationship to pick up!
oh and Ruth and Justin also. i love that Justin pretends not to like MCR!! he loves them really! haha! and Ruth checking out Frankie's ass! too funny
right well thanks very much. can't wait for more!
also i will be keeping an eye out for your darker Frankie story in the future!
Author's response
Thank you so much for leaving such a great review.
I'm so happy that you noticed the bits about Mikey and Gerard. I have this whole parallel idea in my head about the Mikey thing but it might get to much. I might do a separate story but then i have this Frank idea too. God i'll have no life lol.
I'm so happy that you like the way i'm writing the guys, it's so difficult and if i'm even a tiny bit close i'll be happy.
Ruth and Justin will come back into much more i promise. Jill's going have so much to tell them and so much to keep secret.
I can't resist putting Frank moments in there and i hope you like the Jill and Frank interaction at the end the new chapter.
I think i need to shut up now before i give too much away :)