Review for CyberTech

CyberTech

(#) Seelvor 2008-09-12

I agree with Cateagle: there are a few small typographical problems with this story that a beta would clear up for you.

It's entertaining, and as I was reading this chapter, I kept thinking; "this is cool..." I kept thinking about the variations you could have (Hermione instead of Ginny etc) and others.

I have to say, Iron Man Harry Potter (which is the basic gist I got from this story) is a concept I've not read before. I've seen Batman, Dresden Files, Devil May Cry... but never Iron Man. I look forward to more.

One other thing: according to the site, there are SEVEN chapters to this story, but I can only find six. Where the hell's the other one?

Author's response

Nauh, there is only six chapters up at the moment. I have no idea why I would say seven, problby just a glitch with the site, I have noticed a few myself.

Well anyway, thanks for the review. I know I could do with agood beta for the few typoes, and grammar. However, I've been through 5 already, and they all let me down.

Well as for having Hermione instead of Ginny in the pairing... well first I'm not a fan of Harry/Hermione, and second I wanted Ginny for Ami's best friend and secret lover because they are a lot more simular, plus Ami saved Ginny's life, which brought them closer together.

Haha... I also haven't read any Harry Potter/ Iron Man Xovers.

Well I'm glad you've enjoyed it, I'll stop blabbering now, lol!