I agree with Cateagle: there are a few small typographical problems with this story that a beta would clear up for you.
It's entertaining, and as I was reading this chapter, I kept thinking; "this is cool..." I kept thinking about the variations you could have (Hermione instead of Ginny etc) and others.
I have to say, Iron Man Harry Potter (which is the basic gist I got from this story) is a concept I've not read before. I've seen Batman, Dresden Files, Devil May Cry... but never Iron Man. I look forward to more.
One other thing: according to the site, there are SEVEN chapters to this story, but I can only find six. Where the hell's the other one?
Author's response
Nauh, there is only six chapters up at the moment. I have no idea why I would say seven, problby just a glitch with the site, I have noticed a few myself.
Well anyway, thanks for the review. I know I could do with agood beta for the few typoes, and grammar. However, I've been through 5 already, and they all let me down.
Well as for having Hermione instead of Ginny in the pairing... well first I'm not a fan of Harry/Hermione, and second I wanted Ginny for Ami's best friend and secret lover because they are a lot more simular, plus Ami saved Ginny's life, which brought them closer together.
Haha... I also haven't read any Harry Potter/ Iron Man Xovers.
Well I'm glad you've enjoyed it, I'll stop blabbering now, lol!