Oh my, great story. Me and my sister are reading this at the same time and we are thrilled.
Please stop it with the '''oh-my-fucking-god''', cause it's driving me nuts...it's not good to my ears.
yeah, i realised the swearing could be excessive...i looked through the story though, and figured out that it becomes instrumental to characters, showing their changes and what-not. so, I'll take on board what you say, but please don't be offended with the swearing in the next few chapters, cos it actually affects plot lines and characters :P
thanks for reading and reviewing!