hm this sounds really good. not as cliché as many other mcr fanfics on this site. i'll be looking forward to what happens next. could you tell me how old everyone is? i know it's hard to involve it in the writing cause it's in missy's point of view which means that we're reading her exact thoughts at the exact moment she thinks them, and i don't know about you but i don't think about my or my sister's age 24/7 =] so yeah it would be cool if you just let me know like this?
Author's response
hey thanks for the review,
I think I worked it out that Missy is 25, Jess is 15 and Kate is 10.
Thanks again!