Bad spelling and punctuation aside (double question marks, first two letters of sentences capitalized, missing quotation marks and a tilde for some reason) this story was rather dull, even for a drabble. Nothing happened besides Wormtail cutting off his arm and even that was a snore.
Also, if you wanted us to read you Harry bashing stories, why not post them here. Or at the very lest, post the address in this story or a link in your bio so page we don’t have to rely on Fanfiction’s shoddy search engine.