I can't tell you how much i love this story, you have me laughing, almost crying and then waiting in anticipation for what will happen next.
Some of your lines are hysterical and the bit with Frank teasing Jill with the photo - brilliant.
Jill's Dad was so funny.
thank you so much Neve
Author's response
Thanks Moonpig for reviewing and for leaving such a fab review. I'm so glad you liked the chapter and i know i take an age to update but i write so much and never want to stop at a cliffhanger. Let me know if i ramble on :)