Hi Neve,
I really love this story and was excitred to see an update!!
And what an update it was.
It was sweet when Bob lied down with Jill and just held her.
The story of her mother's death was so moving and real because that's how you feel after losing someone. You're just waiting for them to walk through that door.
The photograph incident was hysterical and Worm being a "traitor" LOL!!
At the end saying good bye was just so sweet.
I really get so excited when I read this story because I know I'm going to read something special.
Thanks for the update and looking forward to more.
Author's response
Thank you so much :)
I've experienced someone really close to me dying and it tore me in two, i don't think you ever get over it but you learn to move on and it does get easier. If i even managed to convey Jill's feelings slightly i'll be glad. Kind of cathartic.
I like including Worm in my story but i know nothing about him so if i'm getting him wrong just shout at me.
Wow, i'm so pleased you like my new chapters. I wish i could right faster but it takes me an age.