Oh wow! well i did cry! and then i was laughing! and then i had a tear again!! emotional......me??!
brilliant update! loved how you wrote Jill's dad and him joking with Bob. and Frank is just brilliant!
thanks so much!
Author's response
I feel bad that i'm happy i made you cry. I mean i'm so pleased that you could really feel the words in this chapter. I want people to really feel for Jill and understand her as a character. Thank you so much.