Copied from my review over on FicWad:
“You listen to me Ronald Weasley. If you ever make such an insulting proposition toward me or touch me again I will hex you until you’re nothing but a greasy spot on the floor.” -- that wouldn't take much effort on Hermione's part seeing that Ron's already halfway there.
Although I'm a tried and true Harmonian (or however it's spelled) I was thinking that it was N/Hr. I'm sort of glad Neville's gotten some touch.
Hermione summed up the feelings of everyone at the table succinctly. “Ew.” -- I concur
It slowly dawned on Ron through the pain that he had actually had sex. And as he recalled it, pretty good sex too. Sure it was with his sister, but still… -- double 'ew'
Molly gasped, but a grin spread across Arthur’s face. “Well Molly, you can’t say we haven’t been expecting it. There’s only one thing for it. Ron, Ginny, you’re going to get married.” -- triple 'ew'
“No dear. There is no Prewett clan. I was born Molly Weasley, and I fell in love with my handsome big brother.” She leaned over to Arthur for a kiss. “We’ve always been together, just like you and Ron will be.” -- the depths of 'ew' have just intensified beyond all previous records.
I liked the lemon scenes, just enough info to be exciting but not smutty (of course, I would've liked smutty -- smutty is always good - unless it's HP/LV or HG/SS that more 'ew' than RW/GW but nowhere near as bad as HP/GW).
A fun, albeit 'ew' read
Shawn(a.k.a.cloneserpents)
Author's response
- thanks for the ew review...
- This is the smuttiest thing I've ever written, and likely to stay that way