Hello, My name is Carol and I am a retired English Composition Teacher. I love Harry Potter and since I am crippled I really do not have much to do. Now as to your story. I will say that it is well concieved and extremely interesting. A similiar but not indentical story existes on Fanficauthors.net so it will be interesting to see how the two stories compare and contrast as they develop. I do like your concept and your expression of the original manifestation of Harry's Power. Keep the trilogy developing.