Review for The Exchange Kid

The Exchange Kid

(#) Sassy 2008-10-05

Bad news about the foot! :( I guess, keep it raised and relax.

Great chapter though! Short but plenty going on and things that I'm sure will crop up again later.
Love your use of foreshadowing - great to see people writing without giving everything away in the first chapter!

Love it - more soon??

Take care of that foot!
Sas x