Review for Brought Together, Torn Apart

Brought Together, Torn Apart

(#) Moonshyne 2008-10-08

Hey there,

Charli playing in the basement by herself spells trouble. Jade is such a horrible mother. I can't wait until she is gone, no matter how tough it will be.

Besides Bob can be the Mom!! LOL!!

Great update looking forward to more.

Author's response

Hey, yeah it is trouble, I haven't decided how much trouble yet though. I know Jade is an awful mom, poor Charli. At least she has Gerard there for her, and the guys.

Don't worry I dont think Jade will last the whole story. The thing is I write the chapter to fit my mood, so ifI'm angry, its usually a violent chapter etc. Writing helps me vent haha, and whichever characters are in they way suffer the consequences!

Thanks for your review :)

dondon xo.