Fuck, I can't believe I didn't fucking get that goddamned alert. Gah. You posted this like...two weeks ago, I'm sorry. I didn't get the email and I wasn't really on ficwad a lot, so I didn't check. You're allowed to virtually kick my ass for that.
Anyway. I'm so glad you updated this. Seriously, this was a kickass chapter. And I liked that you pointed out how Ray's voice is "slightly high" cause that is so true. I've noticed that. I love Ray. And I also loved Gerard in this chapter, he seemed cool.
And why is Frankie panicking about Bert calling?
I guess I have to stick to my side of the bargain and update my Quert...I'm so lazy. Gah, the flashdrive that I saved it on broke so my half-way finished chapter 10 is now gone so I need to write it all over. Which I'm too lazy to do. Sue me.
So write more soon...I don't know if you will though, since you don't have 5 reviews. Does it count if I review 5 times?
Author's response
Nah it's okay. I won't virtually kick your ass, i'm just happy that you even reviewed.
Thank you so much for your comments. They are really sweet and thoughtful and they make me smile. Ha, I know, Ray does have a high voice! He sounds like he hasn't quite gone through puberty haha. Aww I love him really. He's a cool dude. Yeah, Gerard is meant to be a likeable character in this story. I quite like his character. Though I think I prefer Bert here. He's gonna be quite an enjoyable character to write as he's quite complex in this story and not all he seems. I'm so trying not to give too much away here...
And yes, I did just say I was gonna continue. I kind of think i'll enjoy writing this story but I didn't get many reviews so I didn't think it was that good. But your review was really sweet and flattering that I think i'll continue. Maybe it was wrong of me to ask for 5 reviews...but I just didn't wanna write something that no one was really gonna read. But I'm just gonna carry on now because I just think i'll really enjoy writing it. So yeah.
Thank you anyways. Hope you'll continue reading. Oh, and i'm kinda a bit stuck on that Frert one-shot. I have writers block before i've even started it ha. It's kinda hard. If you want, you can attempt to write it?