Review for Brought Together, Torn Apart

Brought Together, Torn Apart

(#) Moonshyne 2008-10-13

Hi there Dondon,

I loved this chapter and felt so bad that he had to endure the social worker inspecting Charli.

But bad Donna, at least be brave enough to admit what you did.

I also loved how he put all the guys names down and was so careful about answering the questions fearful that they might take Charli away.

Great job.

Author's response

Thanks a lot :)

Im not sure when Donna will tell Gerard, if she does ;D

the guys are like fathers to her, just wait till they go on tour :D

thanks so much for your review!

dondon xo.